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    To feel that, love
wouldn't it be wonderful?
If only the world was as colorful
as the sunlight in his eyes.
    hold my hands behind my back
cover my face with fingertips
to see that butterfly effect
the ripples over clear emotions
    rain spattered window reflections,
autumn leaves and you and me
tomorrows, today, and seven years ago
spinning hands and spider-webs
    poetry spills out of silence
read those lips that drip with lust
hold her in the dark while moonlight sings
deadly romance shatters the song
    do you feel that, love?
nothing is what it seems until it's too late
never look twice and two steps forward
the past is past and future is to come
  
:iconautumsun:
Exactly what the name says. Just a poem.
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:iconkikyo-kina:
I like windows.
And looking through them.
So I like this poem.
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~AutumSun Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad!
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:iconbabiambi94:
niiiiice i always like your writing you should write a book.....:P
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~AutumSun Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to. But i have commitment issues. I can never finish one.
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:iconbleeding-pain:
i love this. especially because i can realate to it soo much. props again taylor! your vondafull!
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~AutumSun Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. I'm glad people are liking it.
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~IsabellaMichel Nov 11, 2008  Student Writer
Wonderfully descriptive. :heart:
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~AutumSun Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :heart:
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~SuperTaate Nov 11, 2008  Student Writer
Ooh, it's very pretty. ^.^

The words flow very well too, and although I don't quite understand the poem, it paints pretty pictures. ^.^
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~AutumSun Nov 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't understand it either.....:w00t:

haha
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